Wednesday, March 26, 2008

Haiku: Spring


As winter recedes
tides of mottled detritus
wash the spring ashore

4 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

As if the tide had saved spring from the wreckage of winter! Lovely.
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Pam said...

I enjoyed thinking about how spring has a lot of cleaning up to do and how we use the phrase of spring cleaning. Nice poem

Greyscale Territory said...

Cleansing, refreshing tides make a wonderful metaphor for Spring!

Great write!

Gemma

Raven said...

That's beautiful! Wat a wonderful way to think of that old tired snow. Nice photo too. Today the sun is out here for a change and snow mountain is melting behind my house. I have hope.